I think the most important thing I learned from this is the response,
which will be very useful in the future for analyzing things. Analyzing things
rhetorically can help you see what a thing is saying, no matter what it is. I
learned about the thesis and topic sentences, which will help me greatly with
several things in writing, especially in school. Starting early seemed to help
with getting a good paper written, and since it is a good idea anyway, I’ll
be trying to do that in the rest of the semester. I struggled with the thesis
and topic sentences most, but I think that problem is solved. I will try to use
outlines a bit more because that will help with the structure which, in turn, will
help with the thesis and topic sentences. Overall, the assignment was a good
one because it helped me learn, which is what I want from school.
“All there is to thinking… is seeing something noticeable,
which makes you see something you weren’t noticing, which makes you see
something which isn’t even visible.” Honestly, this does not make sense to me,
but I will roll with it. You have to look for the things that stand out to see
what is hidden, right? The rhetorical response makes you do just that: look for
what the author does with rhetoric and analyze it for the details. As for
Orwell’s piece, I did not notice how deep it went. Maybe I only scratched the
surface. In any case, I can see how reading rhetorically and analyzing
therewith can help you find detail in places you might not expect.
Sounds great! Thanks for sharing, Jesse. I'm appreciate your discussion about the thesis and topic sentences. I think this is one of the biggest struggles for a lot of students, at least at the beginning. I think just your awareness of this is key and suggests that you'll be that much closer to getting it down moving forward. It's all a process. I like your discussion of strategies you'll use in the future, and I am thrilled to hear that you learned something through the process. This is always the goal! Thanks for sharing! Keep it up.
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